You’ve given no reason for your readers to understand why you’ve brought up Oed. It doesn’t make sense here for you to talk about that play because you’ve given no reason to.
Consider the narrative you’ve told. It’s bried, has little to no detail, and you don’t finish telling your story; you just stop telling it. You readers have no reason to care about your tale because you haven’t given any details that let them relate to or imagine it. Everything is vague and it seems unreal because of that. Your connection to Oed is incredibly brief and doesn’t reflect much consideration of the story or the assignment.